ProfessorChaos22's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

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Liked it

I like this song, I'm not a big fan of FL though, I'm a Logic guy myself, but that doesn't matter. My only suggestion would be to fill in the song with song "growls" or ambient reverberated drum beats. It sounds a little empty in some parts. I believe Industrial should be very busy constantly with a few breaks. I like the mix though, so I gave you a 9.
Great job!

MrIguana responds:

thanks. i haven't used FL studio in a while, but you should have voted for the resubmitted version. this one is useless. And I kinda wanted the empty bass part, but the ending is kinda lacking but I just wanted to finish it. Oh well.

[Battle to the Death-FF6]

Got a few tips

Overall not too bad, I don't think it's a rip off of Mario Bros., it does sound like it belongs in it though. In my opinion though it sounds a bit empty in parts. The snare could use some reverb and the song in general could use some Orchestra Hits to create more suprise and tension.
I didn't like the ending too much, a little too short, no finale.
In general you did a good job, Just add a little more diversity and the element of suprise and it would be even better.
peace

MooMan911 responds:

Thanks for the tip. =)

[Calmed by Chaos]

Pretty good

For musicianship I give you an A. B for originality, I could tell it was original. But it didn't flow into different moods, basically it wasn't a "complete" song (intro, body, climax, conclusion) in my opinion, . Not that it wasn't good, It is a lot better than a lot of stuff I hear on this site. I can be a tough rater since I am a songwriter myself and believe me I'm a lot tougher on myself than anyone!
Overall a good song, I like the style and the sound was good.
Good work.

Bad-Man-Incorporated responds:

Thanks man. Yeah, I had maybe an hour to think up make up and record. So...It was just wanking to get the mellow stuff out so it doesn't taint the brutal stuff, I sooooo love to make. haha. Thanks again, man!\m/

[Torched Soul]

A few tips

Dude, you're clipping pretty bad, it makes it sound like shit, honestly. Make sure you adjust the preamp so it doesn't clip when you play. If it's too soft, raise the master volume, just don't clip like that!. 2nd, have a plan to where this song is going, sometimes it just sounds like banging on a guitar. Keep the rhythm guitar and lead guitar seperated, maybe pan one right and one left. Do you have a drum machine on your sequencer? If so use it, make some stupid easy beat and it can sound much better.

I could tell you had something, but it needs drums. Keep practicing!

Shiverwar responds:

... Yeah... This is edited from my last response... I know this was crap kind of... But hey, you're just trying to help.

[SSJ3_Goku4567's Zelda Theme]

uhhh

First off tune your guitar, the tone was awful. Second if you want to record seriously you have to get rid of the ambient noise (people in the room?). I could tell what it was, but not very well. Keep practicing and tell people to shut up when you're trying to record.

Shiverwar responds:

[EDIT] Look, man, I'm sorry about my earlier response to this. I was kind of upset at the review, I guess. I learned from my mistakes... well, sorta... Anyways, it wasn't you who made me feel like an idiot. Now that I think back, it was myself who made me look like an idiot. I'm sorry about my bad response.

[-Titanic -]

uhhhh...Titanic!

Celine Dion isn't classical. It was ok, but more techno than "Dion". Cool sounds, you should use them in some original stuff, but please don't remake the Titanic song, there's not much you can do with it that will sound good. Good job matching the melody though, maybe a metal remake would sound cool...nah.

Pyroific responds:

i wasnt sure which genre to post it under ^^;