Well, let me start out by saying I love the chicken dance, even with all the silliness involved. I will second that by saying this is much better then the last song of yours I reviewed. As for constructive criticism, well, it needs more. It needs more bass, it needs more melody, it needs more structure, in my opinion. But I do think it is an improvement, and I can see you are learning. So keep going brother, make it happen.
7/10 & 4/5
Thanks, ProfessorChaos. I'm sorry about my reaction to the first review you left me on my songs. I thank you for the constructive criticism. Peace to you, brother.
Great piece, I enjoyed it a lot. The mixdown is fantastic, that can be rare on this site. Great sounds, good work in general. My only complaint would be the ending, it all ended so quickly. You had such a base going on with the bass lines, the blasts, I felt it could've had a bigger ending. This of course is my personal opinion, so of course I gave you 5/5 since it was truly a work of art. Keep it up.
Here's another slacked melody hitting the dance scene. Very good effort with the arrangement, but seriously we need to hear a different damn progression!!!!!!
Don't get me wrong I like the song, but I am sick of hearing the same thing!!
Awful, just awful. Get original dude...
Hey man, I like the mix you got here. I'm not really a big hip hop fan, but I respect all forms of music. This is the first song of yours I've reviewed, so I must say I am a tough reviewer, so don't take the 7 I gave you personally. That's actually a good score on my scale. So here's my feedback.
The song you have here is a little repetitive. The clarity is impressive as well as the choice of effects, but it gets a little boring after a while. I could see a good rap going with this, you should really do some or get someone to do it, as a simple beat it's really good. It doesn't really change much throughout the song, I'm one to write diverse music, although my music on this site does not have limiters so it is a little quieter than this, they're all rough drafts.
The clarity is good, nice mix you have here.
As for originality, it's ok. I hear a lot of stuff like this, it's not always a bad thing though. Like I said before it needs some good lyrics to finish it off. You have a good setup.
Overall it's a good song, I don't really believe you wrote it in 10 minutes though. Seems like an exageration to me. Unless you used all pre-existing loops, then it seems fit. Good effort and good mix.
Don't feel bad about all the haters on the site, voting doesn't matter. I don't vote at all, too many jealous people giving talented people 0's. It's the feedback you should listen to, I give honest feedback and never give out 10's, and I never expect 10's on my music either. A 10 in my mind is absolutely perfect. No flaws whatsoever.
Anyways, good work and keep writing man.
Well thank's for tha review..This was wrote in 10 min no simples no loops made by hands just like mother's pancake's..Well if you don't belive me just ask Greeksta-69 he well tell you.Well it really dont matter what these little kids say on here they just can keep on rateing it 0's because just like Rick James say(Im Rich Bitch)And for every one that dont know that's was my 1 1/2 years old talking on tha track..Yea i know he can talk good..And he already in school pre school that is..Some people say that when George Bush became President..That he fuck them up????? They say they went from big house to Trailer,from a lexus to a hyandi..But im still good and still making money.But it all good i just sold that beat and made a hit..But my kid voice was not in it just to make it clear..And tha only reason i put it on here like this is people on here take your shit and say they made tha beat you know what im saying..But i guess they say damn i wanted this beat but cant get it because of that kid voice.hahahaha Because i ran into a kid that was calling him self a beat maker and he hade one of my beats off new grounds i was this little mothafuc***..I was that's good mane?? So that why i tag it like that and then i see some one went all tha way down give 0's but my SCORE is so high it really didnt even fuck with it they better go get a gang of there little friends to take me out and when it all over and all my score's or 1.74 or 0.34..O well and at tha end of tha day all said and done..I'll still have all my shit at tha end of tha day..Well thank for this review and it was only far to write as much as you did to my Number one fan..~1~
WTF? Nah, it's not that bad, but it sucks. Sorry man your flash is pretty cool but whatever this is (in my opinion) it's pretty bad. No I will not suck up to your ass because you're the "founder", it's like 2 seconds long! Keep making those kick ass flash submissions though. You need to do more reviews man, I know managing Newgrounds is time consuming but we would all like to know what you think. Be brutally honest dude.
If this was a little longer I would rate it better, but it isn't. Ok try though.
A little too close, still pretty good
This really isn't classical in my opinion, and it does sound a lot like Jurassic Park theme, not exactly the same so I would not call you a rip off artist. But when it comes to copyrights John Williams may have grounds to take legal actions (it is an important section of the melody). Just be carefull.
If this was a complete ripoff I would rate a 0, but it isn't. There is a lot of original stuff in the song, and a good build up after the middle quiet section. But because of the opening line being almost exactly the same (at least a section of it) I cannot rate this too well.
Not only that but it ends a little abruptly.
For the most part you did a very good job, even if it sounds a little like Jurassic Park you added a lot of original elements.
Hey, I completely understand about the whole Jurassic Park thing. I hope J. Williams doesn't sue; I really wasn't going for it at all, just trying to be original. Umm, I really can't pick out a solid genre for any of my music, 'cause I like to switch in and out. It ended so abruptly because NG wouldn't let me finish the whole thing at one time (4000 KB max), which is why this is the first half of it. My CPU crashed, which is why I didn't finish the second half, so I gotta try to find all the instruments I used in the first one...Thanks for the review!
I like this song, the sounds are really good. Nice flowing melody and good chord progressions, the description you've provided fits the music perfectly. But as with every song I have my opinions on some things. Generally I really like this style of music, and the sounds you have are near perfect. This is one of the best classical compositions I have heard on this site, yet I feel a few composition elements were missing, in my opinion.
The start was good, nice and empty feeling. The strings came in very strong yet quiet, set the mood well. The rest of the song had plenty of very nice progressions and the feeling remained somber and sad. The one thing I think was missing was good dynamic contrast. There really wasn't much of a climax to it. There was a climax of sort, but not really a strong emotional feeling that one would experience after loosing a son. It's really missing that one tear jerking moment, that moment in time where the father absolutely breaks down and begs the rain to mask his sorrow. This is in my opinion, other then that it is near perfection. You have a very good song here, it was beautiful. Keep it up, I'm glad to see this is 2x platinum, well deserved.
This sucks ass
Hola. Just kidding dog. Fuckin' great bassline, I'm lovin it like the big mac motha fucka I am. We should get Flash and make some crazy ass music videos or something. Seriously I like the bassline the best, the rest is crap. Nah, it's all good motha fucka. Keep it up you little douche, I sold 3 of those today, it's a record! I'm kinda drunk this time of night but I will send that shit sometime soon when my disease (procrastinamia fuckinlazyonitis) passes over.
This deserves a 5.
Thanks douche peddler.
I like this piece, a little empty though (hence the 7). Don't be discouraged, 7 is pretty good on my rating scale. I never give out 10s, rarely 9s even. (10-Pure Genius, 9-Genius, 8-Extraordinary, 7-Awesome, 6-Above Average, 5-Average, 4-Below Average 3-Poor, 2-Really bad, 1- Awful and 0-Bottom of the pit. ) So I think it's pretty Awesome!
I liked the sounds you used, and the composition in general is really good. Creepy, but I'm sure you were going for that! So I'll vote 5/5 mainly for the effort and composition in general. I see someone 0 bombed you, immature huh? Oh well, I get that too. This would be a good video game song, like in the dungeon or something. You could add a few more low-end elements, but for the most part I like it!
hey, thanks alot for reviewing my two newest songs, that's pretty awesome.
this song is intentionally sparse, but it could of course use more layers and complexity. i'm still working on it, so i'll try playing around to see what sounds i could use in the background that wouldn't ruin the feel of it.
the zero bombing doesn't really get to me, its pretty much only the reviews that matter. so thanks.
This was a very good piece. Nice use of D minor to A major to Ab major. I love that progression and use it often in my pieces as well. I really like this kind of music. The reason why I gave you an 8, however, is because it got a little repetitive and it was drawn out a little bit over time. If you add some other melodys in the middle it would be 9 worthy. I never give out 10's.
But I'm loving the choir, it's always good in heavy songs. The guitar was pretty cool but a little drawn out. You should add another guitar melody in there somewhere.
Overall this was the shit! I'm gonna vote 5/5 for this, definetly worthy of the top 5 man!
(p.s. you should review/vote my Fight song, it's not done yet but it also has a choir part in it. Give me some feedback, I would appreciate it!)
My word someone who spotted the odd key transitions...
This music was originally written for (and is used in) an adult film, and as such the repetitiveness is important so as not to distract the viewer from his "activities". You'll find a good portion of my later music is utilised in this way :).
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