Interesting
Well, let me start out by saying I love the chicken dance, even with all the silliness involved. I will second that by saying this is much better then the last song of yours I reviewed. As for constructive criticism, well, it needs more. It needs more bass, it needs more melody, it needs more structure, in my opinion. But I do think it is an improvement, and I can see you are learning. So keep going brother, make it happen.
7/10 & 4/5
Thanks, ProfessorChaos. I'm sorry about my reaction to the first review you left me on my songs. I thank you for the constructive criticism. Peace to you, brother.
Good mix
Hey man, I like the mix you got here. I'm not really a big hip hop fan, but I respect all forms of music. This is the first song of yours I've reviewed, so I must say I am a tough reviewer, so don't take the 7 I gave you personally. That's actually a good score on my scale. So here's my feedback.
The song you have here is a little repetitive. The clarity is impressive as well as the choice of effects, but it gets a little boring after a while. I could see a good rap going with this, you should really do some or get someone to do it, as a simple beat it's really good. It doesn't really change much throughout the song, I'm one to write diverse music, although my music on this site does not have limiters so it is a little quieter than this, they're all rough drafts.
The clarity is good, nice mix you have here.
As for originality, it's ok. I hear a lot of stuff like this, it's not always a bad thing though. Like I said before it needs some good lyrics to finish it off. You have a good setup.
Overall it's a good song, I don't really believe you wrote it in 10 minutes though. Seems like an exageration to me. Unless you used all pre-existing loops, then it seems fit. Good effort and good mix.
Don't feel bad about all the haters on the site, voting doesn't matter. I don't vote at all, too many jealous people giving talented people 0's. It's the feedback you should listen to, I give honest feedback and never give out 10's, and I never expect 10's on my music either. A 10 in my mind is absolutely perfect. No flaws whatsoever.
Anyways, good work and keep writing man.
Well thank's for tha review..This was wrote in 10 min no simples no loops made by hands just like mother's pancake's..Well if you don't belive me just ask Greeksta-69 he well tell you.Well it really dont matter what these little kids say on here they just can keep on rateing it 0's because just like Rick James say(Im Rich Bitch)And for every one that dont know that's was my 1 1/2 years old talking on tha track..Yea i know he can talk good..And he already in school pre school that is..Some people say that when George Bush became President..That he fuck them up????? They say they went from big house to Trailer,from a lexus to a hyandi..But im still good and still making money.But it all good i just sold that beat and made a hit..But my kid voice was not in it just to make it clear..And tha only reason i put it on here like this is people on here take your shit and say they made tha beat you know what im saying..But i guess they say damn i wanted this beat but cant get it because of that kid voice.hahahaha Because i ran into a kid that was calling him self a beat maker and he hade one of my beats off new grounds i was this little mothafuc***..I was that's good mane?? So that why i tag it like that and then i see some one went all tha way down give 0's but my SCORE is so high it really didnt even fuck with it they better go get a gang of there little friends to take me out and when it all over and all my score's or 1.74 or 0.34..O well and at tha end of tha day all said and done..I'll still have all my shit at tha end of tha day..Well thank for this review and it was only far to write as much as you did to my Number one fan..~1~
A little too close, still pretty good
This really isn't classical in my opinion, and it does sound a lot like Jurassic Park theme, not exactly the same so I would not call you a rip off artist. But when it comes to copyrights John Williams may have grounds to take legal actions (it is an important section of the melody). Just be carefull.
If this was a complete ripoff I would rate a 0, but it isn't. There is a lot of original stuff in the song, and a good build up after the middle quiet section. But because of the opening line being almost exactly the same (at least a section of it) I cannot rate this too well.
Not only that but it ends a little abruptly.
For the most part you did a very good job, even if it sounds a little like Jurassic Park you added a lot of original elements.
Nice work
Hey, I completely understand about the whole Jurassic Park thing. I hope J. Williams doesn't sue; I really wasn't going for it at all, just trying to be original. Umm, I really can't pick out a solid genre for any of my music, 'cause I like to switch in and out. It ended so abruptly because NG wouldn't let me finish the whole thing at one time (4000 KB max), which is why this is the first half of it. My CPU crashed, which is why I didn't finish the second half, so I gotta try to find all the instruments I used in the first one...Thanks for the review!
This sucks ass
Hola. Just kidding dog. Fuckin' great bassline, I'm lovin it like the big mac motha fucka I am. We should get Flash and make some crazy ass music videos or something. Seriously I like the bassline the best, the rest is crap. Nah, it's all good motha fucka. Keep it up you little douche, I sold 3 of those today, it's a record! I'm kinda drunk this time of night but I will send that shit sometime soon when my disease (procrastinamia fuckinlazyonitis) passes over.
This deserves a 5.
Thanks douche peddler.
Pretty good
I like this piece, a little empty though (hence the 7). Don't be discouraged, 7 is pretty good on my rating scale. I never give out 10s, rarely 9s even. (10-Pure Genius, 9-Genius, 8-Extraordinary, 7-Awesome, 6-Above Average, 5-Average, 4-Below Average 3-Poor, 2-Really bad, 1- Awful and 0-Bottom of the pit. ) So I think it's pretty Awesome!
I liked the sounds you used, and the composition in general is really good. Creepy, but I'm sure you were going for that! So I'll vote 5/5 mainly for the effort and composition in general. I see someone 0 bombed you, immature huh? Oh well, I get that too. This would be a good video game song, like in the dungeon or something. You could add a few more low-end elements, but for the most part I like it!
Good Work!
hey, thanks alot for reviewing my two newest songs, that's pretty awesome.
this song is intentionally sparse, but it could of course use more layers and complexity. i'm still working on it, so i'll try playing around to see what sounds i could use in the background that wouldn't ruin the feel of it.
the zero bombing doesn't really get to me, its pretty much only the reviews that matter. so thanks.
Nice man!
This was a very good piece. Nice use of D minor to A major to Ab major. I love that progression and use it often in my pieces as well. I really like this kind of music. The reason why I gave you an 8, however, is because it got a little repetitive and it was drawn out a little bit over time. If you add some other melodys in the middle it would be 9 worthy. I never give out 10's.
But I'm loving the choir, it's always good in heavy songs. The guitar was pretty cool but a little drawn out. You should add another guitar melody in there somewhere.
Overall this was the shit! I'm gonna vote 5/5 for this, definetly worthy of the top 5 man!
(p.s. you should review/vote my Fight song, it's not done yet but it also has a choir part in it. Give me some feedback, I would appreciate it!)
Great work!
My word someone who spotted the odd key transitions...
This music was originally written for (and is used in) an adult film, and as such the repetitiveness is important so as not to distract the viewer from his "activities". You'll find a good portion of my later music is utilised in this way :).
hey man
I read some of the responses to my reviews. First off, don't take these statements personally, I don't bash people to make them look like idiots, sometimes it's hard truth that is the best for beginners. You are apparently a novice recorder/musician, all songwriters go through that stage. You just need to practice, it took me 5 years of songwriting to even really show people my work because I thought I sucked, now i just have fun doing and even though some people don't like and some do, I don't care because it's all for fun. It takes time man, don't be discouraged, and don't quit. In time with practice you will get better. It's cool that you are putting stuff up here to share. I am not a pushover when it comes to reviewing, so don't take it personally. Just have fun doing it and expect some people to not like it.
All I can say is practice practice practice.
And I don't think you are an idiot nor was it my intent to make you look like one, every musician starts out as a 0, slowly they make it up to a 10 (and believe me I haven't given any real song on here a 10).
Just work hard and it will pay off. As for this song, it was ok. National Anthem and all, the recording quality could be better. I did take a 6 month course in computer recording techniques so if you want any tips PM me and I will be happy to help!
Peace out and dont get discouraged!
Thank you for being so considerate. I am, yes, still a novice recorder/musician, but I am gettin better! I tried makin my own songs, but they were all deleted, so I cant see then anymore, but YOU, my friend, are really helpful and reliable, so thank you so much. And I will come to you if I need any help... well, there is one thing...
nice song
I like this piece, very flowing. I like the string progression. I see someone 0 bombed you, immature, I get that too. Oh well.
Well I'm not going to 0 bomb you, in fact this deserves a 5 purely because of the effort. Nice arppegiation and diversity even though the progression repeats the melody doesn't.
You should put more stuff up. Good work!
(p.s. I am a very strict reviewer so an 8 is pretty damn good! You'd have to write a new Beethovens Moonlight Sonata to get a 10 from me!!!)
thank you very much for the kind review professor.
Not too shabby
I like the melody of it, but I do agree with the other reviewer that is does get a little repetitive, but it could be worse! It sounds more like a video hame song than classical (with the drum beat and all).
But not too bad my friend.
4/5
thanks. yeah.. i suppose it does sound more like a video game than a classical. but the with the piano i wasn't sure what genre it was.. lol
thanks for your reveiw! ill check out some of your stuff too
Good idea
I liked it, one thing I found though are the loud ass drums. It's really taking away from the industrial feel. I can hear a tight ass melody in the background, but the cymbals are drowning it completly! I would give you a 10, but I can't hear all of the music.
Good job though.
Yeah, thx, maybe I should have put it in Techno.... well, whatever.
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